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    Re: Re-Post of Old Story to test the New Board Formatting

    (the remainder...)

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    Tina comes to a stop from the last slap with her back against the door. Sabrina steps in front of her and says, "I just toyed with you in the bathroom that night, honey. But now I'm gonna pump my fists into that glass jaw of yours with all I've got! Then I'm gonna kill you, little girl!"

    Sabrina pumps alternating right and left punches into the pinned Tina, punching her up and down like an elevator.

    ...right cross to the jaw
    ...left cross to the jaw
    ...straight right in the left ***
    ...left uppercut to the jaw
    ...straight right to the ****
    ...left cross to the jaw
    ...right cross to the right ***
    ...backhanded left cross to the jaw
    ...left cross to the jaw
    ...right uppercut to the left ***
    ...left uppercut to the right ***
    ...straight right to the guts
    ...left uppercut to the ****
    ...right cross to the right ***
    ...left cross to the jaw
    ...right cross to the jaw
    ...left cross to the jaw
    ...right cross to the jaw

    Tina starts to slide down the wall, semi-conscious from the beating Sabrina has given her. The blonde follows her as she slides down, her knees hitting the carpet when Tina's do. Grabbing the woozy brunette by the bangs with her left hand, Sabrina keeps Tina from falling on her face.

    Sabrina coos, "Not so fast, honey. I'm not through with you yet. Before I finish you off, I wanna pound on that little box of yours, and smash up your little *******. But first, off with that ****ing miniskirt, little girl. You're not woman enough to wear it!"

    The blonde shreds Tina's miniskirt off with her right hand, still holding the dazed brunette up on her knees with her left hand at the bangs. Sabrina throws the ripped fabric off to the side, then ***** her right fist back and says, "I drained your boyfriend dry that night, Tina. Better than you could ever do. Take this in your cheap box, little girl!!"

    Sabrina pumps her right fist deep into Tina's naked **** again and again. Tina is so punch drunk she can't even move her hands to cover her *******d and bleeding ****. Sabrina moves upstairs with her deadly right fist.

    "And take this in your miserable ****, little girl!!!". The blonde's right fist smashes the brunette's **** in a wicked tattoo of blows. Tina's **** are swollen and bruised when Sabrina finally stops.

    "Now, honey, you're gonna get punched cold. Then I'm gonna waste your worthless little ***!!"

    Sabrina fires three savage right fists into the beaten Tina.

    The first crosses her jaw to the right.

    The second whistles backhanded across her jaw.

    The final vicious fist smashes straight into Tina's nose, breaking it in a spray of blood, knocking her out cold.

    Sabrina, still keeping her left hand buried in the now unconscious Tina's hair, slowly gets to her feet. The victorious blonde moves behind the brunette, shifting her hold on Tina's hair to the top of her head. Glancing over at the two sisters, Sabrina sees Terri rolled over on her stomach, and Tanya laying on her side, both girls struggling to get to their feet. Sabrina smiles wickedly as she holds the knocked out Tina by her hair up on her knees facing them. The two brunettes can see that Sabrina has smashed their younger sister's **** into a mess. Her bruised **** stand swollen from her chest. Her face is a beaten wreck, mouth and nose a gory paste, both eyes closed and blackened, cheeks puffy and swollen, jaw hanging open. Sabrina, smiling evilly, coos to them, "Say good bye to your little sister, you ****ing *******!!!"

    Both Terri and Tanya groan....

    "Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnooooooooooooooooooooooo!!"

    ...as Sabrina ***** her right fist up and back.

    "Oh, yessssssss!!!!" Sabrina screams, as she sends three savage right fists smashing down into the base of Tina's neck, each punch harder than the last...

    "CCCRRRAAAACCCKK!!" "UUUUUUHHHHH!!"

    "CCCRRRAAAAAAAAAAACCCKK!!" "UUUUUUUUUUUUUHHHHH!!"

    "CCCRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACCCKK!!"
    "SSSSSSSSSNNNNNNNNAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPPPP !!"

    "UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH !!"

    The final wicked punch breaks Tina's neck, killing her. Sabrina, smiling wickedly, then calmly opens her left hand. Tina slowly falls over onto her face to the carpet.

    Sabrina shudders with an ****** seeing her dead rival lying at her feet.

    "Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmuuuuuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh h!!"

    Terri and Tanya finish getting to their feet and start advancing, fists up, towards the quivering blonde...

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    Re: Re-Post of Old Story to test the New Board Formatting

    Looks fine, Cat ... except for the Editor which is 'cleaning' up some words ...

    By the way, can't remember reading this story before .... Hmmm! Would like to see what happens to the other 2 sisters ... even though it's clear!

    Meaow
    Jessie
    A straight bitch is just one who hasn't tasted pussy yet!

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    Re: Re-Post of Old Story to test the New Board Formatting

    Thanks Jess, you mega-hot babe you! *kiss*

    The story behind this tale is that I originally wrote it back in 1995! Looking back on it, I can't believe I used to write drivel like "this leather-gloved punchout." I have the very first draft and final version of this tale, but it needs a LOT of work just to reformat it.

    For you though, gorgeous, I will try and work on it over the holidays. Yes, you can guess what happens, but there are 3 fights BEFORE this one as well! I think you'd enjoy them too.

    As they say, what's old is new again!

    Happy New Year to all!


    Cat

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    Re: Re-Post of Old Story to test the New Board Formatting

    posted two new, fairly long catfight stories, seems to work okay.........
    [url]http://cavmag.com[/url]

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    Re: Re-Post of Old Story to test the New Board Formatting

    This is an awesome story, I love your work I really enjoyed the entire Chronicles of Tammie. Are you ever going to post the entire story and the pre-stories you refer to?

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